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d say its a good drawing aside from the girl's pose. Legs trailing the swing in motion may have worked better because some things are hard to convey in a still frame. You could always write in sound FX.
"swiiing! *stop*" NO, that sounds dumb. your way works better.
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I don't know much but I do know this:
With a golden heart comes a rebel's fist.
I think if she was hanging off the gun with her body pointing in the same direction as the motion of the gun it would work better. Back to the viewer, face up and legs trailing the gun's swing. That way her hands are holding on would be more apparant also.
Apart from the image not quite conveying what you wanted its pretty sweet, the Mech and smoke look pretty wicked.
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